The waves heave
Pulling the earth out
Dwelling in the depths
Pushing the ocean
Up and over
Touching the core
The soul of her depths
Thrive within
A thousand miles away
Landlocked and lonely
I feel her depth
In me
Her vastness mine
A single tear
An ocean of salt
The moon holds nothing
To the pull my own heart
A thousand miles away
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I love this extended metaphor! The tidal pull we feel and you put little poetic jewels in it like the teardrop as an ocean! Beautiful metaphoric dichotomy. Keep sharing your soul like this. I love it!
Thank you Scott!